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		<title>The exclamation point: What the &#8230;!</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Mar 2009 22:28:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Exclamation points are fun — but they are potent. Just as you would use caution with anything fun but potent, please use these sons of guns sparingly and with care.
The exclamation point expresses a strong degree of surprise, incredulity or other emotion:
• Boo!
• Holy cow! That is one large ball of twine.
• Schnikies — that [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Exclamation points are fun — but they are potent. Just as you would use caution with anything fun but potent, please use these sons of guns sparingly and with care.</p>
<p>The exclamation point expresses a strong degree of <strong>surprise</strong>, <strong>incredulity</strong> or other <strong>emotion</strong>:</p>
<blockquote><p>• Boo!<br />
• Holy cow! That is one large <span style="color:#993300;"><strong><a title="twine" href="http://www.roadsideamerica.com/story/8543" target="_blank">ball of twine</a></strong></span>.<br />
• Schnikies — that was a fun party!<br />
• I’m gonna wash that man right outa my hair!<br />
• Sunshine on my shoulders makes me happy! (OK, so it doesn’t work so well here, but <span style="color:#993300;"><strong><a title="Sunshine" href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WcWZXPnRbBo" target="_blank">check this out</a></strong></span>.)<br />
• I won the flippin’ lotto!!! (If this is the case, and you happen to be writing out the statement, by all means, feel free to use more than one exclamation point to get your enthusiasm across. For most cases, however, one will suffice.)</p>
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<p><span style="color:#000000;"><strong>Placement with quotation marks</strong></span><br />
The exclamation point goes inside the quoted material when it refers to that material: “We’re having smashed potatoes and cheese wheels for dinner and you’re gonna like it!” he exclaimed.</p>
<p>It goes outside the quotation marks when it doesn’t refer to that material: I love reading “The Scarlet Pimpernel”!</p>
<p><span style="color:#000000;"><strong>Other punctuation</strong></span><br />
The exclamation point stands alone when it comes to ending sentences. Do not add a comma or period after an exclamation point. No matter what.</p>
<p><span style="color:#000000;"><strong>Placement in advertising</strong></span><br />
Don&#8217;t do it. Much like the sunburst in lame advertisements, it cheapens your product.</p>
<p><span style="color:#000000;"><strong>Usage: single vs. multiple</strong></span><br />
If you’ve ever received an e-mail from me, you’ll know that I use this punctuation mark almost as often as I inhale. It’s a habit I’m trying to break, but I’ve at least kept it out of any kind of serious writing (i.e., <strong><span style="color:#993300;"><a title="Copywriting &amp; editing" href="http://jajo.net/work.cfm?searchby=client&amp;client=cox&amp;project=openRoad&amp;category=&amp;type=" target="_blank">what I do for a living</a></span></strong>). People must have outlets, I say, so exclam away in your e-mails — if it doesn’t offend too many people. Just make sure to limit your !!! to the most casual of instances.</p>
<p>Happy trails!</p>
<p>SAK</p>
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		<title>Hi</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Nov 2008 19:58:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[OK! So this is my very first word/grammar/language/writing/editing/ranting/pondering blog.
I suppose that I should mention what this blog is going to be about. The intent is to focus primarily on editing issues — nuggets I have seen throughout my career that either come up as questions time and again, bug the bejeezus out of me or [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK! So this is my very first word/grammar/language/writing/editing/ranting/pondering blog.</p>
<p>I suppose that I should mention what this blog is going to be about. The intent is to focus primarily on editing issues — nuggets I have seen throughout my career that either come up as questions time and again, bug the bejeezus out of me or simply are wrong by all accounts. It will include writing issues, as well. And it sometimes will take me in an altogether different direction than initially intended. So be the beast that is blog.</p>
<p>And if you’re wondering what makes me an expert on this editing/writing topic, here’s my answer: I’m no expert. I will have an entire blog entry on self-proclaimed experts one of these days, but that’s for another day. Here’s a quick rundown of my experience: master’s degree in English, 5½ years as a proofreader/copy editor at a local ad agency, 2½ years as a marketing copywriter at Hallmark Cards, almost two years as an editor and copywriter at another ad agency and several years as a proofreader-editor at several other joints. And I, like everyone else on this planet, have a lot to learn, so I’m not an expert, per se. But I follow the <strong><span style="color:#993300;"><a title="AP Stylebook" href="http://www.apstylebook.com/" target="_blank">AP Stylebook</a></span></strong> pretty faithfully (pretty, not completely). And I gotta let out some editing steam somehow, right? So this here blog’s my virtual teapot. Toot, toot.</p>
<p>Thanks much for checking it out, and please come back to see what else is driving me nuts. I’ll be adding entries at least weekly, perhaps biweekly. And PLEASE leave comments/suggestions/inquiries on the blog. No cussing me out (for I do have control on what gets posted to the site and will have no qualms about barring any caustic replies); workable feedback is what I’m looking for. Should be interesting stuff. Now, on to the guts of this blog.</p>
<p>Happy trails!</p>
<p>SAK</p>
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